Comments for Thirteenth Dimension http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com Largely Unedited Fiction by Rob Diaz Sat, 12 Sep 2009 15:35:43 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Of the People by nursesaide http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/08/29/of-the-people/#comment-192 nursesaide Sat, 12 Sep 2009 15:35:43 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=254#comment-192 Hi Rob, Did you get my comment at all? Hi Rob,

Did you get my comment at all?

]]> Comment on Of the People by nursesaide http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/08/29/of-the-people/#comment-191 nursesaide Sat, 12 Sep 2009 15:33:06 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=254#comment-191 I got a kick out of the story's twists and turns. It felt like you were really writing about what's going on today but in metaphors. I liked it when James turned the supervisor into an alien and it was a riot when he decided to become a senator. It's good to see that your brain is in great shape and that the screwballs have not given you their contageous disease named "screwballwithatwistontop". Love, Ginger I got a kick out of the story’s twists and turns. It felt like you were really writing about what’s going on today but in metaphors.

I liked it when James turned the supervisor into an alien and it was a riot when he decided to become a senator.

It’s good to see that your brain is in great shape and that the screwballs have not given you their contageous disease named “screwballwithatwistontop”.

Love,

Ginger

]]> Comment on Of the People by annyswolf http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/08/29/of-the-people/#comment-189 annyswolf Sun, 30 Aug 2009 01:38:58 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=254#comment-189 Great story! Great story!

]]> Comment on Of the People by Chris Chartrand http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/08/29/of-the-people/#comment-188 Chris Chartrand Sat, 29 Aug 2009 21:41:31 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=254#comment-188 Nicely woven story, though I got a bit turned around in the middle there. I dig the tongue-in-cheek names of the institute an street names. I'm guessing you took a bit more than 5 minutes. Really, very good. Nicely woven story, though I got a bit turned around in the middle there. I dig the tongue-in-cheek names of the institute an street names. I’m guessing you took a bit more than 5 minutes. Really, very good.

]]> Comment on Music in the Air by Annie http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/07/18/music-in-the-air/#comment-172 Annie Fri, 24 Jul 2009 09:45:41 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=220#comment-172 Thanks for submitting your story this week. You obviously had the whole story very clearly in your head and from the flow of the prose, the characters and scenes demanded that they be expressed. Fiction Friday is such a great space for first drafts to be published and yours captures exactly this. Blood on a page - ideas thick and fast. I look forward to seeing this story tightened up, superfluous words and phrases cut - so the the true beauty and thrust of the story is shown. my submission for this weeks prompt can be found here. http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/07/capturing-lost-notes.html Thanks for submitting your story this week. You obviously had the whole story very clearly in your head and from the flow of the prose, the characters and scenes demanded that they be expressed.
Fiction Friday is such a great space for first drafts to be published and yours captures exactly this. Blood on a page – ideas thick and fast.
I look forward to seeing this story tightened up, superfluous words and phrases cut – so the the true beauty and thrust of the story is shown.

my submission for this weeks prompt can be found here.
http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/07/capturing-lost-notes.html

]]> Comment on Music in the Air by virginia http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/07/18/music-in-the-air/#comment-171 virginia Thu, 23 Jul 2009 18:40:57 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=220#comment-171 Wow, terrific story. It held me in suspence. I truely like this one. Heads up, my friend. Ginger Wow, terrific story. It held me in suspence. I truely like this one. Heads up, my friend.

Ginger

]]> Comment on Music in the Air by Sandra Arnold http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/07/18/music-in-the-air/#comment-169 Sandra Arnold Mon, 20 Jul 2009 15:01:57 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=220#comment-169 Great story! Great story!

]]> Comment on Music in the Air by tammy76 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/07/18/music-in-the-air/#comment-167 tammy76 Sun, 19 Jul 2009 07:12:10 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=220#comment-167 Awesome story! I did not see that ending coming. Awesome story!
I did not see that ending coming.

]]> Comment on Music in the Air by Chris Chartrand http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/07/18/music-in-the-air/#comment-165 Chris Chartrand Sat, 18 Jul 2009 16:21:01 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=220#comment-165 Great story. I enjoyed it a lot. Great story. I enjoyed it a lot.

]]> Comment on Music in the Air by annyswolf http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/07/18/music-in-the-air/#comment-164 annyswolf Sat, 18 Jul 2009 14:39:39 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=220#comment-164 awesome story-I especially like the ending! awesome story-I especially like the ending!

]]> Comment on Freefall by virginia http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/freefall/#comment-119 virginia Sun, 21 Jun 2009 16:52:01 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=184#comment-119 correction: Could be not could ne. correction: Could be not could ne.

]]> Comment on Freefall by virginia http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/freefall/#comment-118 virginia Sun, 21 Jun 2009 16:50:36 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=184#comment-118 I enjoyed the story and did not find the ending so sad. I felt that Dean blacked out and that there would or could ne a sequel to this story as Dean is saved. Good read, Ginger I enjoyed the story and did not find the ending so sad. I felt that Dean blacked out and that there would or could ne a sequel to this story as Dean is saved. Good read, Ginger

]]> Comment on Freefall by gigidiaz http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/freefall/#comment-117 gigidiaz Sun, 21 Jun 2009 16:07:47 +0000 http://thirteenthdimension.wordpress.com/?p=184#comment-117 I like! I like!

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